Read the sentence.
Walking can be a form of exercise just as effective as running as far as health benefits and might even be a better option for some people with certain health problems.
Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?
For certain people, walking can be a better form of exercise than running if you have certain health conditions.
Certain health problems that some people might have make walking better than running because they can get the same health benefits.
Walking has many of the same health benefits as running and might be a better option for people with certain health conditions.
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Answer:
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Explanation:
According to the given sentence, the speaker is trying to convey the idea that walking can be an effective form of exercise that can be used in place of running for some people with certain health conditions.
Therefore, the revision that corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence is option D. This is because, it goes straight to the point without unnecessary repetition which causes wordiness and eliminates redundancy.
As i opened the door i let out a sigh, the heat wasn't helping. the inside of the car was just as bad as the park. the leather seats burned my bare thighs and i found myself hurrying to crank up the engine to turn on the air. sliding the key in almost felt natural, like tying my shoes or riding a bike. soon i heard the familiar purr of the motor, it was soothing and brought me back to time in my dads auto shop.
<span>Arsat left his brother behind because he was afraid his pursuers would catch them. As he pushed his boat away from the shoreline he saw his brother running towards him being pursued by their enemies. His brother tripped and fell and the enemy was up him, he called out to his brother but Arasat left and sacrificed his brother in order to save the woman he loved.</span>
Answer:
I even don't know anything about myself
