1.The apostrophe after the word years is not supposed to be there. 2. The word we've is the wrong word. 3.The apostrophe in the word trial's is not supposed to be there. 4.You're is not the right word for the sentence and should be changed to your. These are the mistakes that I have found, but at the same time, recheck to make sure these mistakes can be found within the paragraph.
Answer:
D
Explanation:
your answer would be had written
Answer:
It was a beautiful day lemonade so sweet, probably not good for your teeth. The sun was shining, just a little bit of mist on the other side of the wall. As I'm lying down relaxing with the warm sun on my skin until a shrill cry echoed in the fog, I was only 15 at the time. I had no idea what I was about to get myself into.
As I stand up, I feel the cold mist breathe across my skin. Suddenly It's dark in the blink of an eye, everyone and everything was gone. The warm sun turned cold, everything around me was depressing. A little bit of sunlight still left, I see chase and Anika running after a faint shadow I assume is Marilyn. Left in the dust with nothing but fear, I start yelling at them to wait up. Filled with questions I run as fast as my feet can carry me up to them.
I see them climb over the wall, Hesitant at first I look back, then lookup. As I make my way up the wall, climbing on vines. I can't think of anything. I'm just climbing, thoughtlessly climbing up a wall I had no idea what was over. As I get to the top I hear Chase start yelling my name, as I look over the wall I'm frozen with fear. I see something unbelievable.
(I hope this helps, feel free to change anything!)
It says that the person had no eperience and it says that the person was only out of school for 2 years
It is the first one <span>The author was a recent graduate.
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