1) We stood there waiting, which felt like eternity. We could hardly see anything because of how dramatic the fog was but it ended up clearing. We were on a ticking time bomb and had no time to hide. There we saw a mysterious creature. We were absolutely terrified of the Hound. It was enormous, it looked like it had eaten 2 ponies. It’s revolting face was giving off this vibrant green glow as the darkness appeared. We were absolutely frightened by this beast. We couldn’t even set fire at it because we were so startled. The revolting creature raced after Sir Henry, leaving him as startled as can be.
2) The enormous creature of the darkness started heading closer to the tracks. We could finally see clearly, no more fog. I looked up I could see the stars and the sky full of the moonlight.Holmes and I finally decided to fire at this creature fiercely with no hesitation. When we fired, a sound which seemed from hell had raised upon us-a howl from hell. The creature because fierce and raced onward, leaving nothing but dirt behind. We saw a glance from Sir Henry but it was too late. The ruthful Hound had knocked him out cold on the floor. I slit his throw open leaving nothing but blood and trails of its own left behind.
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