Usually, you will find the strongest pieces of evidence in the body paragraphs.
Wow, social media have an effect on her
its kinda hard when you suddenly stop using social media because you et addictive and what I would tell her to do is to reduce the amount of the time that she spends on social media and connect with the exterior world
This should be in a different section not world languages
There are 5 more gray kittens than 2 black kittens.