Try to rewrite this description in a more mature style. This is my grandmother. She is old. She is small. She has got fair skin.
She has got brown eyes. She has white hair. She has a nice personality. She has got a bad leg. She smiles a lot but she has pains in her tunee she has arthrills. She paints pictures of things like birds, animals and flowers. She remembers my birthday. She buys me nice presents. She wears a gold locket around her neck. It is from my grandfather He bought it for her when they got married. She likes it very much .
This is my grandmother. She is a senior citizen. She is a petite woman. She has a light complexion and her skin is crystal clear. Her eyes are brown in color. Her hair is white. She has a pleasant personality. Her leg is in poor shape. She grins a lot, yet she has arthrills and has pains in her tunee. She does paintings of birds, animals, and flowers. She is always aware of my birthday, she never forgets. She always gets me lovely gifts. Her neck is adorned with a gold locket. It was given to me by my grandfather. When they married, he bought it for her. It holds great value for her
It is partially true that people talked the way Shakespeare had wrote. Back then people did not speak in blank verse and since it was a play their speech was exaggerated. However, it is true that people did use vocabulary like “Thy” and “Thine”.
