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well the story wasn't added but ill try my best!
first, based off ha we have read this unit id say people value time a lot! time is very valuable and cant be change once it is gone its is gone forever! i always hear people say if i could go back in time in change everything i would! i can tell from the passage that the narrator really values time which can have a big reflection on life!
next, in the passage they try to explain and show a life lesson in time they do this by using very good chosen words which can help the reader picture the events! as time goes by people realize their good and bad throughout there life! but what matters most is how they choose to reflect on it! this could result to making things worse or better! so this is why you are suppose to think before you act!
third, they author also tries to show that no one is perfect! i say this bectuse ist states that peploe make mistakes but its them to chooe howto learn from those mistakes they have made! however they choose to result with the problems is how they will do in the near future this isnwhy us people need to see that we arent perfect and to pay attention to what we are doing!
Explanation:
now you can do the last to paragraphs because how ill you learn if i just do all the work for you and i even left some ussage correcting so that you can correct them hope this helps good luck on your essay
_from Mike_
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hi the answer will be option 3 in the first line she says that art Is so unscientific. but in the last line she says that art reminds her of science.
C as it has a better view on the situation
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D) Most people figured that Columbus discovered America, made friends with the Indians, and then told everyone else about this land.
Explanation:
Revision of any text or passage is need for a number of reasons, ranging from a simple grammar mistake to making the paper more precise, focused, structured, etc. The revision also allows for improved analytical skills, challenging one's own ideas, more strengthened argument, etc.
Among the given sentences, the one that needs to be revised is sentence D. Looking at the words used in this particular sentence, it is evident that the words are too informal, be it using<em> "most people figured", "made friends", or "told everyone else"</em>. They make the sentence too simple, too friendly, something one does with a close friend or relative. If these words are revised with words like 'most people believed', 'formed close relationship/ befriended', or 'revealed to everyone', then that makes the sentence seem more formal.
Thus, the correct answer is option D.
