Answer:
01. She read a book when the phone rang.
02. My son found a coin when he walked
03. She brushed her hair when the postman came.
04. When they arrived we waited for the bus.
I'd say that's fairly true. As a writer myself criticism can point out faults if used correctly
Ethos is about establishing your authority to speak on the subject, logos is your logical argument for your point and pathos is your attempt to sway an audience emotionally.
