The rhetorical device that the author use in the line so the readers feel the terror that he experiences is : C. anticlimax
when the character's pocket got emptied out, readers expect something more important will drop. But it's only a piece of bread
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The weeping willow tree is as beautiful and graceful as dove.
When comparing the GDPs, Instead of saying compared it to, you might want to type, "in comparison." A few transition words also might help the piece become a bit smoother. Other than that, good job on the writing! It seems very well researched!
