You can revise your claim to make it sound more original or specific by changing the hook to a very different but still effective one, you should have different types of redirect to stand out
Percy's best friend, Grover comes in the middle of the night.
Grover, from the waist down is a goat.
Answer:
The reason he ask is because he had seen someone entering the westing mansion with a limp and we all know it turtle kick someone it could lead to a sore leg or a limp.
Explanation:
As you can learn from "The Crucible" Rebecca nurse is a professional so, she has the power of knowledge necessary to understand medical issues. Apart from that, she has the power of communicating with relatives. She is able to deal with stressful situations and emphatize with people.
Answer: indirectly, through his lack of action.
Explanation:
Jim does nothing in this excerpt apart from look at Della who then tried to interpret this look by diagnosing it for the presence of emotions that she had prepared for but instead found none.
We are therefore introduced to Jim's character indirectly through Della's eyes as she analyses his lack of action.