What is the problem with this research thesis statement?Women have influenced the world including Hillary Clinton, Kathy Lee Gif
ford, and Margaret Thatcher. A. The topic is too general and doesn't define the influence these women have had.
B. The paper's outline is shady by referring to Kathy Lee Gifford.
C. Nothing. The thesis gives a narrow topic, stance, and an outline of what each woman's influence was.
Answer: Her advertisement should be organized. Also, It should have key factors the the President talked about. (If he talked about unity, then have a sketch that depicts unity). It should catch your attention in ways that the speech could.
