Were u quarantined ? just in case so u don’t wanna mess up the essay if the teacher looks into it
<span>Heaney incorporates Old English poetry elements in his modern translation through punctuation. In Old English poetry, one often used half-lines. This means that each line of poetry was split into two half-lines, and in each of these half-lines there were two strongly stressed words, often with the purpose of giving musicality to the poem. Heaney follows this half-line pattern in his modern translation.</span>
Who is Krimsky? Where is the passage or quote where krimsky speaks?
I don't know a lot about papers but for examples, the sentence that says "Then after Lily died, he stepped over James dead body and left her traumatized son in his crib and just clutched Lily’s dead body."
The word JAMES should have an apostrophe.
James's
"Severus Snape is not a good person and Harry really needs to rename his child. "
Instead of saying good try something like "pleasurable" or "delightful"