Answer/Explanation
The Treaty of Versailles could have been improved in many ways. First, more countries could have helped pay for the damage, The treaty gave some German territories to neighboring countries and placed other German territories. It would have been a more settled argument if they used the 14 points which were general and not bias.
(How would change it to make it better)
First, more countries could have helped pay for the damage because all of the countries took part in this war. This also could have been improved because the treaty of Versailles only blamed one country.
Be places both before and after the conjunction’
Yes. Instead of a semicolon after Party, end the sentence. The rest is good
I believe it is Quantity.
It is 4. because it says in the paragraph and I quote: "helium has a very low density. it is used in daily weather balloons to carry instruments that record, tempature, humidy, and pressure readings in the atmosphere.