Question

Mario needs to write an email to his professor explaining his absence: Hi, I wanted to let you know that I would be missing class today because I am sick as a dog. I have been puking my guts out, and I can't even get off the bathroom floor. Thanks How can he revise it so that it is appropriate for the audience? the answer

Answer 1

Answer:

Take out the extra context and detail.

Explanation:

The email states, "I have been puking my guts out, and I can't even get off the bathroom floor." This is the part where it is inappropriate for the audience. I would say that this would be a better email:

" Hi, I wanted to let you know that I would be missing class today because I am sick as a dog. I have been feeling quite sick and don't feel like getting up. Thanks, and have a good day!"