I would say the first one
To me these would be better.
Thesis statement:
Mindfulness techniques,such as daily meditation,have been proven to increase wellbeing and reduce illness and disease. People should consider making daily habits out of these helpful practices.
Supporting details:
. A daily meditation practice has been proven to lessen the stress response in the brain, even when a person is not actively meditating.
. Mindfulness techniques can alleviate symptoms of anxiety and depression and increase feelings of peace and happiness.
. A study by the American Heart Association showed that a group of people who practiced daily meditation were 48 percent less likely to have a heart attack or a stroke.
Idk Brave, Ruthless, Caring, Kind
Answer:
When I was eighteen I decided I wanted to travel alone. I bought a ticket to Australia, I packed my bags and I left for the airport. I had to do a scale in Italy and then I had to take the flight there to go to Australia. I had to wait four more hours and I was sleepy so I decided to take a nap and set an alarm to wake up in time for my flight. But I didn't. I missed it and I got stranded in the airport for one whole day. It was the first thing that went wrong but not the only one. When I finally arrived to Australia, I had a lot of bad experiences. I felt lonely, I lost money and I missed home. However, I also made friends for life, I discovered amazing landscapes and I had the time of my life. So, nevertheless, it was my best experience.
Explanation:
To complete this exercise, you have to <u>write a story that ends with the line given.</u> Since the line has the word <em>"nevertheless"</em> included, you should write about something that was bad or went wrong but ended up being <em>"the best experience"</em>. It's important to follow the rules given, which are the word limit and the different parts of a story.
