You cannot outlaw Halloween! Imagine all the votes you would lose. Everybody would hate you. I am asking you not to outlaw Halloween because everyone relies on Halloween. They think that Halloween keeps people happy. If you outlaw Halloween, then be ready to face the wrath of the whole town. Or the decrease in population. You will lose all the people that live in your town. If you hate Halloween that much then you can move to another town and leave our town alone. I hope youcondsider the consquenes of outlawing Halloween.
This makes the reader feel as though they are actually inside the story. Because of the author writing thing like 'I' and 'My' it makes the reader feel as though they themselves are the narrator or the first person.
