Landscape listens landscape is being given a human trait. Shadows hold there breath. Shadows are being given a human trait, therefore the Landscape and shadow are being given traits of a person. Simile uses like or as hyperbole exaggerates personification gives personal traits to non people
I don't think a correction is necessary. Both parts of the sentence are already in the present tense. Plus, the use of "us" in the beginning of the sentence indicates a personal attachment.
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what i would do is be a cop or probably a gamer or play soccer ;-;
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how about you
Answer: the two of us depended on each other and became family
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their love grew for each other - blood relative or not - and they are a family