Question

Choose the passage that violates all the rules of concise and precise writing.

Answer 1

Answer:

C, In so far as my mother is concerned, she has decided to take the

train in order to visit us. I do not openly agree that she is making a

good decision, but I have warned her before of the dangers of

travel and she plans to wear an evening gown.

Add-on:

I hope that helped you.

Answer 2

Answer:

a

Explanation: