This is a nice story! It inspires fear due to the ton of noises you put and the detail into it.
The only change that I would suggest is removing some of the noises in favour of other senses. It appears as if you've mostly only used the sense of hearing.
Also consider making only some of the noises in caps. Some of the noises are in caps but do not need to be in them
This is just my suggestions, such as changing it to past tense, I hope that this helps! (Edited) SLAM. The door behind me shut, the lights went off. It was dark, it was too dark. l couldn't see my hands, or even where I was stepping, I didn't have a clue. It was surprising enough I didn't trip. BOOM. It was a big enough sound to be thunder. I raced down the long room, it was like a hall. I knew what was coming next; all my fears coming true. ZAP. FLASH. Lightning struck. Boom. BOOM. thunder pounded. There was a pitter-pattering of rain. It was just racing down and down the hall. Splash. I tripped, but I kept moving. Running or racing it didn't matter. Flash. ZAP. I could still hear the rain and the splashing. The same thing kept repeating in my head, "Don't stop running, don't stop running, don't stop running, don't stop running." My loop of thought got louder and louder, "Don't stop running, don't stop running." I covered my ears while yelling, “Stop, stop!" I kept sprinting down the long hall. I couldn't stop, no I couldn't. I heard sirens, maybe they had come for me. I didn’t care about anything other than getting out of there. The sirens became louder. And louder, and louder. BOOM. Everything was colliding. It was too much, too overwhelming. SCREECH. An awful cry started. My head was still repeating, "Don’t stop, don’t stop." What was happening? I didn't know. There was a ticking noise followed by a screech. Boom. Something flashed. Pitter patter. Tick, tick, tick. Another flash. Screech. Splash. BOOM. SPLASH. What was that? My hands were covered in blood. Flash. Tick tock. BOOM. Tick tock. Screech. Tick tock, tick tock. Boom. Pitter patter. The ticking got faster. Flash. Screech. Splash, SPLASH. I trip, and splash into the water. I couldn’t bare this. I screamed ”STOP IT I SAY! JUST STOP! STOP IT!" A small “drip,drip,drop" sound was the only response I got. I curled up into a ball, lying there, soaked in blood. I cried in the corner, scared to be found, touched, or carried. Seconds turn into minutes, minutes turn into hours, the hours turn into days, the days into weeks, weeks into months, the months into years. I felt to as if I came to death. I couldn't see, nor hear. The only thing i could hear, was the same, “Tick tick tick tick. Zap zap zap zap. Tick, zap, tick, zap, tick, BOOM, FLASH ,tick zap zap tick zap tick, BOOM!”
BOOM, FLASH, Scratch! BOOM, FLASH ZAP, BOOM, SCREECH. It got louder and faster. ZAP ZAP TICK SCREECH BOOM BOM FLASH, ZAP, BOOM SCHRECH tick, tick, tick, BOOM! FLASH, BOOM! ZAP. It just wouldn’t stop, it added on new sounds I knew would come, POUND, POUND, POUND! ZAP, SPLASH, SCREECH, BOOM, FLASH, SCREECH, ZAP, ZAP, TICK, TICK, POUND, SPLASH! BOOM, SQUEAK, SQUEAK! TICK TICK POUND! It started again. It kept repeating over and over. BAM, BAM. Then it comes back, that little voice... in my head... telling me, to keep going.
Sorry if this isn’t what you meant, or I interpreted it wrong
Sirens were wailing and everyone was frantic Bella jackson was murdered. It was a bloody scene she was stabbed 15 times and her arms were tied up in a praying position, her hair was shaved off and on her forehead there were letters carved. Like a signature. There were four more murders after that all girls all in a praying position then it stopped until today. A video was released of Maddi Smith tied up “Help me if everyone does not complete these tasks in the next 48 hours fg will continue no one is safe.” Then she looked over and screamed, “Please no!”...madi stammered trying to say this as quickly as possible “He wants you Sofia, run!”. Then suddenly her head was bashed in and the words appeared “I warned her, now i'm coming. No one's safe”.
Flash forward
“Please no! I didn’t do anything! Why are you doing this'' sofia screamed hysterically. “ Sofia sofia! What's wrong!?” Justice ran up the stairs seeing Sofia laying on the floor crying. “ What’s this?” justice asked pointing to the note in her hand. It read “I see you all the time you're never alone.. Your next watch out it's almost time -Fg '' there were then three stones thrown through sofias window each with one note taped to it. The first rock said You the second one said, and the third one next. Noone knows what happened to justice and Sofia after that they were just forgotten and never seen or heard from again. The mysterious Fg still left notes and videos of their victims but everyone stopped caring and they were forgotten. Until one day a video was released of Sofia she was laying lifeless, a lifeless corpse of Sofia Dean, blood everywhere her head was ripped off and her eyeballs ripped out of their sockets. It was a gruesome scene. After death. Justice could not believe what she was seeing. Why would someone so cruel put a video like that with so many details in it. Is the person trying to make a point. Seeing the video justice wanted to solved what had happened to her friends, so she put matters in her hands and started to training to become a investigator and an cop
Explanation:
you can always addddd more but I have been working on lots of short stories
<span>In November 1872, Anthony voted in the presidential election. Two weeks later, she was arrested. After her indictment, Anthony gave her famous On Womens Right to Vote speech. In the speech, Anthony invoked the preamble to the U.S. Constitution, pointing out that it addresses We, the people, and not We, the male citizens. She argued that those countries that denied women the right to vote were oligarchies. At the end, she challenged her detractors to answer this question: Are women persons?</span>
During her trial, Anthony was unable to testify on her behalf, since womens testimony was not considered to be competent. Instead, her lawyer presented her arguments. She was convicted of casting an illegal vote and fined $100. Anthony refused to pay the fine, stating, May it please your honor, I will never pay a dollar of your unjust penalty. Resistance to tyranny is obedience to God.
