I'm pretty sure the first sentence? Everything else sounds a tad opinionated.
Example of a sentence that most needs to be revised because it's description is too vague is : we hike two miles uphill in the blooming forest.
Usually, you hike on the mountain not in the blooming forest.
hoep this helps
I believe it to show some source of burning or chaos,sorry if this did not help
Its the C-girls I just remembered having this question but yah the answer is c girls
Answer:
what is a place you want to see, why would you like to see it. you fill in the blank below
Explanation:
an interesting place I would like to visit is ______, becuase_______. (try telling what inspired you to want to go to this place, and when you started wanting to go.
