What does Hansel do once he hears the plan

Fittoniya [83]

Hello!

I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.

Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"

Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"

I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!

- Mal

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2 years ago

Impotent

mafiozo [28]

Loren, the new manager, is the antithesis of compassion; just yesterday, she fired two people because they were late to work once this week. Corporate headquarters, upset with declining sales, appointed Loren to replace a[n] impotent manager who had been spotted on the golf course during work hours one-too-many times. Loren's many changes and emendation(s) to company guidelines caused a[n] maelstrom in both the warehouse and the salesroom. Employees faced evaluations and new instructions that drove many to resign; however, it was part of Loren's plan. The people who quit, she reasoned, were just impediment to meeting the expected monthly profit margin. Loren spent the first two weeks familiarizing herself with the labyrinth of shelves and palettes in the warehouse. Shreds of textiles littered parts of the packaging area; some were hefty snippets of wool, and others were diaphanous scraps of silk that hovered in the gust created by passing forklifts. She occasionally stopped to introduce herself to the workers, but she ceased her introductions after noticing the regular look of chagrin on workers' faces as they scrambled to look busy or stumbled over the proper responses to her questions. After the first round of resignations-and, firings, most of the workers were intimidated by Loren's bestial management techniques.

Hope this helps! Please let me know if you need more help, or if you think my answer is incorrect. Brainliest would be MUCH appreciated. Have a great day!

Stay Brainy!

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1 year ago

The signal word “while” serves what purpose

Stolb23 [73]

EXAMPLE FOR YAA:

Did you know that crocodiles tend to have longer, pointed, V-shaped snouts while alligators generally have wider, rounder, U-shaped snouts?

WHILE signals a difference between alligators and crocodiles.

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2 years ago

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4. What does revision mean? How is revising different from editing?

natali 33 [55]

Editing is more focused on grammar and style issues where revision is more a holistic and continual process.

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3 years ago

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Read this excerpt from Part 2 of The Odyssey by Homer.

zavuch27 [327]

The answer is A. isolation

The excerpt says "each one dwells in his own mountain cave" this means they are alone. Besides their wife and kids they have no outside contact. So therefore; A must be the most logical answer from the given choices.

I hope this helped. Have a great day!

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2 years ago

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