Question

Does this email look ok to send to my english teacher? feel free to add and/or change anything

Answer 1

Answer:

Hope this helps luvv :)

Explanation:

Good evening (sir or mam) , I was wondering if it would be possible for me to redo the journal entry assignment. To be honest, English is a struggle for me, and I have been under a lot of stress lately. Trying to maintain good grades, while saving up for a car, and trying to get a job has worn me out. When I made an attempt at this assignment it was really late, and my mind wasn't fully functioning.  I know that excuses don't justify my grades, but I would really like to show you my best effort by redoing the assignment. Thank you so much for your time and consideration, and have an amazing day !

Answer 2

Answer:

Good evening, I was wondering if I could redo the word journal entry thing for English. I did that late at night and if I'm being honest I don't fully remember clicking submit, I'm trying to bring my grades up especially English. English class has always been difficult for me to focus on.

Anyway I'm trying to get my life together, get a job, bring my grades up and get myself a car. I would really like you to allow me to redo the word journal if that's ok with you.​

Explanation:

I just fixed some spelling mistakes, but everything looked good.