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This paragraph lacks sentence variety because of verb tense, lack of pronouns, and lack of transitions words. The writer could have different tenses in the sentences to add variety to the paragraph and to create a timeline. Moreover, the use of personal pronouns to substitute the word Cory could have change the sentences. Finally, transition word could have add variety and cohesion to the paragraph.
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THIS IS INDIAN JOKE.
SISTER: SALE KUTE REMOTE PAKDA
BROTHER : TERI MA KUTI
SISTER : MAMMA BHAI AAP KO KUTA BOL RAHA HE
BROTHER : MAMMA KO KAHA MERE MOO SE NIKAL GHI ME MAR HI JAO GHA.
DADDY : CHAL NIKAL MERE GHAR SE
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The falling action of the story was when the police and detectives came and tried to solve the murder and see who killed patrick. The main conflict is between Mary and Patrick. Patrick tells his wife that he is leaving her. This ends as Mary hits her husband with the frozen leg of lamb.
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