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Suddenly it dawns on me: <u>the </u>scope of the impending conflict is truly monumental. I had known back in <u>october</u> that political disagreement had reached an all-time high, but I couldn’t have imagined the magnitude of change that was coming down the line.
The canadians tried desperately to have world leaders unite one more time, as seen in a quotation by their prime minister, “knowing the potential and significant impact of countries refusing to negotiate at this point, I would plead with world leaders to make concessions and seek peaceful resolution.” The President <u>hamer</u>, while ostensibly in agreement, made only superficial efforts to realize this eleventh hour maneuver. <u>otherwise</u>, there was little interest, as explained by the lieutenant Governor Steeves of Australia, “<u>many</u> have tried to initiate productive conversations between the competing global forces, without success. Unfortunately, the time for such talks is past.”
Thus is a summary of <u>world</u> <u>affairs</u> leading to our confinement four levels deep underground.
Explanation:
All underlines are suppose to be capitalized
In "the carp" by yun wang, the use of the carp to represent something deeper is an example of synecdoche. the carp is used to represent the pain and injustice of her father’s imprisonment.
Answer:
The world today is <u>- </u>filled <u>- </u>with advertisements. We see them on TV, In the newspaper, on the Internet, and and in our surroundings. The <u>- </u>advertising <u>- </u>industry <u>- </u>effects <u>- </u>the way we look at and judge people around us.
Explanation:
Error 1: The over extensive use of hyphens throughout the sentence is uncalled for.
Error 2: The words "in" and "internet" should not be capitalized because they are not proper nouns. The only reason that you should have a capitalized word is when it's at the beginning of a sentence, or when it's a proper noun.
Error 3: There's a double "and" in the middle of sentence two.
