It looks great! One thing I always struggle with as well is dividing paragraphs. This is important, it looks neater and is professional.
I think you should also add how at first, Hades and Persephone refuse to help, but then Orpheus uses his harp and sings about his grief, which persuades them to help Orpheus.
Good luck!
Gives facts and proven information
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From her speech is shown that Juliet is really in love with Romeo and cannot wait to sleep with him now that they are married. She can't wait to start their married life together.
First conditional .
It’s used to describe things that we think are likely to happen in the future
