In order to have a sentence with an active voice, you need to have to have the main subject perform an action.
"The revision (subject) gives the sentence (action) an active voice."
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maybe you can say, the rope wirings connecting to the bottom of the ship were loose or unsteady and use this as a support foreshadow later when the fierce Strom hits' the rope sinks into the ocean,
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he is sad and feels guilty
In the final chapter of his narrative, Douglass explains that he does not describe his escape with precision, because he does not want to give any advantage to slave owners. Giving them too many details of how did he escape would help slave owners to prevent the escape of their slaves to the North. Douglass hopes to generate in the slave owners a certain feeling of paranoia, and make it as difficult as possible for them to retain their slaves.
