This is just a car crash you can edit it however you want I hope it helps as a base!! Happy Easter<3
I watched the news as the reporter interviewed one of the witnesses in this horrific car crash the man looked almost excited to be telling the story he spoke stating that “One moment the road is there, wide open and safe, the next there are loud noises, acrid smells and pain that you may or may not recover from.” he tells it like it’s an action movie but a car crash comes as a shock and that's an aspect the movies and novels aren't good at showing. It is the equivalent of looking without seeing, a form of emotional blindness.
A cautious and optimistic stance should be adopted while trying to understand the situation in a positive manner.
Answer: 1.The first part was unnecessary and the second part had words that were redundant
2. The extra words were deleted. There were redundancy issues.
Explanation:
1. The first part was unnecessary, since it was transitional phrases. The second part had words that were redundant. For example, you don't need the re in front of duplicate and with the word again. Or office in government with voting,
2. The extra words were deleted. There were redundancy issues. The motto less is more pertains to this sentence.
I would say the correct answer is <span>B) He feels tied to the land and to the weather in which he grew up. The speaker feels free and unrestrained when he is in the open, at night, with the moon lightening up so he can see the endless horizon clearly. When forced to go back into the house because the summer is over, he feels confined and depressed.</span>
Jonas dreamt that he was with his school friend Fiona in the bathhouse at the old folks ‘ home. In the dream, Jonas had a strong felling of desire,something he described as “waiting. .....she explained that felling of ‘waning’ was of something their society called ‘stirrings.
