The meter of this poem is iambic pentameter.
You can tell that the meter is in iambic pentameter because each line has ten syllables and the rhythm follows the iambic patter. This means that the stress of each syllable alternates unstressed then stressed. There are five sets of iambs (a pair of syllables: unstressed then stressed) in each line.
Answer:
It needs a punctuation at the end but other than that don't see anything wrong.
Explanation:
Patriotism may be strengthened by adherence to a national religion (a civil religion or even a theocracy). ... By 'patriotism' I mean devotion to a particular place and a particular way of life, which one believes to be the best in the world but has no wish to force upon other people.
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