The answer would be A, because of its use of commas, and pauses. Hope I helped.
Answer:
His mother said that he was experiencing the "Stirrings" and he had to take a pill to stop it
Explanation:
Repetition of transitional devices as well as repetition of sentence structure could be eliminated. Transition devices should be different every time and if sentence structure is also the same it can ruin the flow.
If I helped you help me out by making me the brainliest.
The word floundered generally mean struggled or went through great difficulty/troubles.
It is most likely analyze the stage direction. I don't think you would use that when you paraphrase.