The corrections are in bold fonts.
<span>To whom it may concern;</span>
<span> In</span><span> regards to the Memorial Day fiasco, while you are aboard your cruise ship Star Princess. We would first like to offer our sincere apology for our part in the mishap. We do not plan on taking legal action against you or the Moroccan authorities, we are requesting an apology in English, this time from both parties to avoid another Waterloo. Captain Johnson may just want to remember a few key items.</span>
Proper nouns should ALWAYS be capitalized.
You could google this it would help you alot all you need to do is get the list of the devices they have read the passage and find what fits best
here is a list of devices
http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-rhetorical-devices.html
<span>The basis of American society has always been the individual and political rights and ideals of freedom and equality.</span>
Answer:
It shows the time scientists used to look for information about Jupiter's climate.
Explanation:
Right at the beginning of the text, the author shows that scientists have spent more than a century researching the reasons that lead Jupiter to have such a strong climate. In this way, the author shows, subjectively, that there was little information about Jupiter in the scientific community, which justifies such a long research.
