Question

Rewrite the paragraph using appropriate substitutes for the substandard words used.

Answer 1

A lot of high school English programs are not efficient when it comes to preparing students for college. For instance, my brother took easy courses during high school so when he got into college, he flunked English. My sister on the other and thought she was taking real hard courses at her high school, but when she came to a State University, she flunked as well. 

Answer 2

Many high school English programs do not adequately prepare  

students for college. My brother took undemanding  

courses at his high school, like cinema, science fiction,  

and the like. Well, he failed English at  

college. My sister thought she was taking challenging courses  

at her high school, but she also struggled at State U.