The third choice is the best revision to the sentence: "I am interested in drawing, painting, and making sculptures."
A pause can be used to give emphasis to a certain point. The pauses can also be used to single out a certain sentence and those sentences are what later get quoted in newspaper articles or people what people use to refer to the speech in question.
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You didn't input an excerpt ? But maybe i can help anyways
First person is when a story is being narrated by one person at a time , the character might be talking about his/herself , usually spoken using " i , me , we"
Second person usually narrates using "you"
Third person only knows the feelings of just one character , refers to all characters using "he' "she" "they"