Answer:
B. By moving to Appleton, Wisconsin
Explanation:
When comparing the GDPs, Instead of saying compared it to, you might want to type, "in comparison." A few transition words also might help the piece become a bit smoother. Other than that, good job on the writing! It seems very well researched!
Answer:
Dr. Naismith first planned to bring outdoor games inside, but they were too physical and cumbersome.
Explanation:
Eliminate repeated words.
Other comments:
'Two' is a number. 'Too' means extra or more than expected-- too many, too much, too late. . .
Two should not be too many to count!
Also be careful to use correct verb forms (planned) (were) to express past tense.
Its a plain necklace and everybody wants it
Answer:
I'm not writing your whole essay but I can write an intro and give you two examples of distractions.
Explanation:
Distractions:
Texting or making a phone call
Here is an article on distracted driving: https://www.cdc.gov/transportationsafety/Distracted_Driving/index.html
Intro:
Distracted driving, which teens are very susceptible to, can lead to car accidents and even deaths. Two types of distractions can be attributed to phones -- texting and phone calls are common distractions when driving. Types of distracted driving can be split into three main categories according to the CDC: visual ("taking your eyes off the road"), manual ("taking your hands off the wheel"), and cognitive ("taking your mind off driving").
