Correct as is
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Then don’t give the person the job
The sentence which makes a <span>revision that offers the most improvement in sentence fluency is:
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Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.
This sentence uses the correct conjunctions and suggests correct presentation and interpretation of the ideas.</span>
<span><span>B. By repeating the
phrase, "he is an honourable man"</span> </span>
By repeating the phrase “Brutus is an honourable
man” and contrasting him to what Caesar had actually done, Antony successfully
persuaded the audience that Brutus was not as trustworthy as he claimed to be. Brutus
was mentioned as an honorable man thrice by Antony when he mentioned three
instances in his speech about the reality of Caesar’s life and action. First,
he said Caesar won many battles; second, he mourned with the poor; and third, he
denied the offer of a kingly crown three times. These three arguments countered
Brutus’ accusation that Caesar was ambitious and it was strong enough to prove
that Brutus was not trustworthy.
<span>Which two of these excerpts from Homer’s Odyssey depict the gods’ involvement in mortal affairs?</span><span>so it would be A
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