Question

HELP PLEASE!! George Washington was Americas first and greatest president. He was born in 1732. His experience as an army officer helped him avoid two wars during his presidency. He stopped the Whiskey Rebellion's from becoming a war in Pennsylvania. He kept us out of war in France. Washington's greatest example was retiring after only two terms.
Answer #3 even after the out-of-place sentence is moved, this paragraph needs revisions. most of the sentences have the same sentence structure. One way to address this is to combine sentences. how could you combine the first two sentences to improve the clarity of paragraph?

Answer 1

Answer:

you should add a sentence about his final achievement and his death.

Explanation:

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