(1) John Hancock High School was overrun with students from all over the state. (2) For the coming three days, the high school w
ould be hosting the National Junior Classical League competition. (3) This competition was the event of the year for many Latin students because it could lead them to the nationals. (4) As a result, many competitors gathered together to quietly study before their tests Which of the following sentences needs to be corrected?
I could be wrong because I’m not sure if I’m correcting spelling or grammar. But I think the answer is 1. John Hancock High School was overran* with students from all over the state.
The evidence provided in the excerpt make the author's argument more effective because it is specific.
The author was specific about the importance of switching to renewable energy. He outlined that it can lead to job creation and he was specific and gave examples about how it can create many jobs in the United States.
