Please someone help me with this too!!!!
So what would be the question you are asking? if you're asking how to hook a reader in your intro start with an onomatopoeia or something like: On a dark and stormy night Elle Mist sat in the corner of her room crying wondering when her parents would come home.
Answer:
Add a 'separation' word
Explanation:
See how there are two 'before', add another word to separate them so it sounds less choppy!
It is all capitalized making it seem like the writer is shouting at us
That is a example of give me points
