No, maybe include some commas
If i could change something about myself, it would be, to accomplish things for myself rather than to pleasure others.
<span>We are
all heroes in our own ways. You are a hero the moment you came out of this
world. You sacrificed yourself sleeping late for your studies, giving time for
your friends and loving your family beyond their flaws. You are hero because
you have accepted yourself for who you are and you do things that you like and
didn’t do the thing you don’t like. You are a hero because in this world full
of masks, you emerged and became the distinctly you. And you have saved not
only yourself, as well as the people around you. </span>
I’m gonna was a great day and then he was gonna he is gonna he really wanna is a good day for me and my mom is your time to be done I gotta is a time to go play with me ima was the day I gotta go to the mall with my parents for lunch today so I’ll bring it back and I’ll give ya my number I’ll call them I’ll send you a picture and send them back and I’ll give ya my phone call I gotta is a great game and I’ll send
It grabs the audience's attention.
Answer: this was amazing might want to double check for any spelling or grammar errors though
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