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Oh gosh, I had to listen to an audio recording of me doing a speech for my English class to make sure I got it all so this is the perfect time for me to answer this!
What I liked about that way I presented myself is that I was actually able to get all my points across, and in the right order, without going away from the script to much.
What I didn't like for one was my voice (lol) so if I could rerecord that but have someone else speaking for me who sounds more confident and less like me that would be great. Another thing I didn't like was that I sounded nervous, so my points didn't come across as well as they did on paper.
Improvements I would make is actually practicing before diving headfirst into recording, so I can hopefully make they come across stronger. I would also ahead of time research a bit more than I did, and add more facts to the actual debate.
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I always had a dream to visit the Taj Mahal. Finally of the trip was planned by our school. I was delighted to go to Agra & visit one of the Seven Wonders of the World. We went to Agra via bus from Delhi. Finally we reached The Taj Mahal. It was built by Emperor Shah Jahan in the memory of his beloved wife Mumtaz Mahal. Twenty thousand workers worked hard day & night & built the Taj Mahal. I had a deep interest in Taj Mahal. We finally reached Taj Mahal. I was speechless see the masterpiece. It was glowing in sunlight.
The white rays were dazzling in sun. The Taj was surrounded by trees on their sides. It is situated on the bar of River Jamuna which adds to the beauty of it. My Joy Know no bounds the memory will always be fresh in my mind, we moved to some near places to explore but I could not stop thinking about The Taj Mahal. It was the time of sunset when we returned for the last time before returning to our hotel. The moon had slightly reflected in the clear water of Jamuna. The Dome shape seemed to touch the sky. The gloving water mode it looks more beautiful. Finally my dream of visiting the masterpiece of love was fulfilled.
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It looked great :) hope this helped
