the first one you would have to add a conjunction to. That makes it correct.
For Example:
Arturo loves to hike and he's familiar with all the local trails.
<em><u>B</u></em><em><u>. The clicking method does not work in noisy places.</u></em>
Answer
1. By changing, deleting, and adding information to make a sentence or paragraph more complete.
2. Reorganising paragraphs logically to ensure unity and coherence in the essay.
Explanation:1. This eliminates all forms of tautology and makes the text more clearer and meaningful.
2. By doing this one ensures that each paragraph is related to the other, and that there is a connection between sentences in a paragraph.