He should use a hands on, interactive approach where the audience gets to try using the computer buttons and features. Your text will have a word that means hands on or interactive.
Well, your cover page is very creative, while the original is kind of bland. Yours also shows all of the different traits that the characters have in the story, while the original does not. It could use a bit more color, but otherwise it's pretty good.
Analyzing the text, it helps the reader identify the authors choices.
"<span>After it had been discouraged from the pursuit the captain breathed easier on account of his hair, and others breathed easier because the bird struck their minds at this time as being somehow grewsome and ominous."</span>