Yes
It uses a lot of commas where you can easily put periods, and it uncomfortably merges multiple sentences into one
well im sure this will get taken down, cause its copied and pasted, but i hope this helps :)
1.Read. The first step to a well-written summary is to read the original piece of work. ...
2.Gather the Main Idea. Once you've finished reading the original piece, take time to reflect on what you've read. ...
3.Reread while Taking Notes. ...
4.Organize your Notes. ...
5.Create a thesis statement. ...
6.Draft a Short Paragraph. ...
7.Check for accuracy. ...
8.Revise.
Here is the site so I didnt plagerize technically, I pulled certain parts and gave crdit where it was due :)))
https://www.enotes.com/topics/how-write-summary
<span>Odysseus’s men are compared to caught fish, showing their helplessness.</span>
Remove the comma after August 12th and you should be all good
