Answer:
1.) Write as much as possible without stopping, even if you
make mistakes.
2.)Try putting your ideas in an order that makes sense.
3.) Revise your writing to address all the editing comment
and notes.
Explanation:
You've gotta brainstorm, write, and then edit.
If you accept either C or D as the correct revision then you have to accept both of them. Hence the best way to treat the sentence is to ignore both of them.
B is not correct either. You can over punctuate.
That leaves A.
Sometimes the right answer to many things is to do nothing. My dad used to say "Don't fix what isn't broke."
A is the answer <<<<<
Answer:
The Narrator didn't believe Herbert at first because Herbert appeared to be very poor, and he thought he was not going to make any money off him.
Explanation:
The Foster Portfolio is about an investment broker who was called by Herbert Foster to look at his portfolio and manage it.
He went to Herbert's house for that purpose but was initially disappointed with the general lack of affluence of the household and its occupants.
According to the narrator "my business is handling other people’s money, and I have a great respect for money" and that he is "a salesman of good advice for rich people", so he couldn't see how he could help a man who appeared to be neither rich nor to have any money to speak of.
That was why he didn't beleive Herbert was in ned of his services.