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faust18 [17]
1 year ago
5

Read the following text from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her sentence fluency?

English
1 answer:
svet-max [94.6K]1 year ago
6 0

Answer:

change is my best friend to has been my best friend add such as before you list your statements and don't start almost every sentence with "I" don't always put a period add commas in between some of the statements

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