What should the writer do to correct this sentence?

English

1 answer:

Alexeev081 [22]2 years ago

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Answer:

During the game, Mary wanted to go to the concession stand badly; but it was too interesting to leave.

Explanation:

assuming that you just want to fix it grammatically:

add a comma after the word game because it is a dangling modifier

add a semicolon after the word badly because it separates 2 independent clauses.

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