Improper waste disposal is the disposal of waste in a way that has negative consequences for the environment. Examples include littering,hazardous waste that is dumped into the ground,and not recycling items that should be recycled. CAUSES 1. Ignorance: Ignorance of people about proper waste disposal.People are unaware of consequences of their unwise acts. 2. Laziness: Can cause improper garbage disposal because people not following the correct rules of proper waste disposal their always throw it what place they want and they have no care what will be the effect of it. 3.Greed: Can cause improper garbage disposal for example burning tires of wheel and plastic instead of keeping it or trade the excess automobile cars tires to maximize on it. EFFECTS Affects our Health Like lung disease,heart problem,skin irritation,problem or abnormality in breathing and more. Affects our Climate As some waste decomposes,it releases greenhouse gases into the athmosphere.Like trapping of hear on earth that may effect of abnormality of weather condition like more storm or typhoon coming per year is happening until now. Air Pollution The open burning of waste causes air pollution or greenhouse affects.for example burning of rubber and plastic. Soil Contamination Is caused by the presence of man made chemicals,the softness of the ground,having smelly soil vapor and other alteration in the natural soil environment. Infections to humans Skin irritation and blood infections resulting from direct contact with waste,and transmitting bacteria from waste to infected wounds.
How can we solve this? Decomposed Decomposed your waste is an option for getting rid of your households waste. You can compost losts of items: food waste, animal waste, yard waste,and much more. Recycling Recycling waste is another option for getting rid of waste. There are many different things that are recyclable: paper, tin, aluminum, plastic and much more. Buy products that are good for the environment Instead of purchasing those plastic pop bottles, find a way that you can buy things that are more environmentally friendly. Some of this include bottle openers, calendars, coloring books, and much more. It is very sad to know that many lives have been sacrificed because of this calamities that have come. Many places in the Philippines are down to flood every time when typhoon comes and worst, a large number of families have lost their shelters and have nothing left for them. Their wealth was ruined by storms, floods, etc. We are experiencing very hot weather because of greenhouse effect and global warming. Many kinds of disease occur because of untidy surroundings. Others can no longer smell the breath of fresh air. All of this are the effects of improper waste management.
So what are you waiting for, stop improper disposal. And we do the Reduce, Reused, Recycle for the betterment of our country.
I'll make some suggestions in order. I also added a lot. You don't have to use them all. Also, I'm not an expert on grammar, so if you think I'm doing something wrong then please don't correct it.
I don't think you're supposed to capitalize "live" when it's not the first word in a sentence. Also I'm not sure if you're supposed to capitalize "land" or "gold" either.
You could say, "Loads of land! <u>Lots</u> of gold!"
"Bounce on a cart" sounds a little... weird... maybe you should do "hop" instead.
You can also put a comma here: "Get your family, hop on a cart, and take the Santa Fe trail." Also, I don't know about this topic, but I don't think "trail" is supposed to be capitalized.
Maybe write "heading to California" instead.
You could write, "With an excess of empty land at a modest expense, there are chances of becoming quite wealthy with gold. Who might not hold onto this once in a blue moon opportunity?" Also, I'm not very sure with "there are chances of becoming quite wealthy with gold" so you can rephrase that, or just not take this suggestion. But I think you should put a period after "gold" and make the next sentence a question.
You can write, "You might be considering what you should pack." End the sentence here, and start the next one; "Well tune in up and snatch a pen and paper, because these are the accompanying fundamentals you will have to welcome on this exciting journey!"
Maybe write "You'll need <u>an adequate supply</u> of food, water containers, blades, comfortable dressing, <u>alongside with your</u> persevering disposition <u>that</u> will set you up for a fruitful undertaking." I don't know what "adequate" means or whether I'm using it correctly. If I'm wrong, don't use that suggestion.
I'm not exactly sure what you mean when you say "This new land will request numerous things from you along these lines, devotion, steadiness, and positive thinking are a portion of the characteristics you can't lose in the cloudiness of the uproar and difficulties you may confront." Do you mean something like, "This new land will request numerous things from you along these lines: devotion, steadiness, and positive thinking. These traits are a portion of the characteristics you can't lose in the cloudiness of the uproar and difficulties you may confront." If this isn't what you mean, you can ignore this.
Maybe put a period here: "Fate blesses people who will place in the work. The outcomes can be the key you need to give you and your family a better life than that they have known."
Put a period and a semicolon here: "Partake in an intersection of societies as you may experience African Americans, Asians, Europeans, Mexicans, and Native Americans. Varying backgrounds are endeavoring to carry on with a daily routine worth experiencing; nobody needs to agree to unremarkableness."
Maybe write this: "Even though diseases represent a danger alongside starvation and unforgiving environments, each hazard merits taking as long as it's for a decent purpose and adds to a decent life." By the way, it triggers me that the quotation mark goes after the period, so ignore that.
Like, I said, you don't have to use any of my suggestions. Also, some of my suggestions may be disagreeing with your writing style; you don't have to use those suggestions.
