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The city located there is Melbourne, Victoria.
<span>a. Lack of buying power for military and financial backing of the war unlike the Union.
they didn't really have anything to sell except cotton and tobacco ( which means less diversity, one market collapse, all collapse)
their main buyer was Britain. The US was able to get the British to not buy Confederate cotton.
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