I believe that you should just check your spelling , capitalize some I's and the word January .
You should also give more detail about the Sunday event.
When you say the word conclusion I begin to think about a short paragraph / summary , this means you should bring the reader in , draw my attention to your mint idea.
I really hope that I'm helping you , :)
There was once a detective who had perused a terrible scene at a house. Sad to say, the type of situation he had to take care was quite a banal one but, also a very implicit one. It was very imminent that the father had done the abuse to the mother; this was was easily assumed due to the fact the kinds were 3 to 4 years old. The detective has a very strong antipathy feeling towards these type of cases but, that is part of his job.
I hope this helps and makes sense. If it doesn't you kinda get the concept?
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D - Idea's that can be shown to be true by research
Your should put your cited source on a separate sheet of paper at the end of your article
3rd person pov
uses the word “she” and there’s no “I” or “you”
