Question

we are in beautiful venice we saw the whole city we rode in gondolas to see the sites we saw incredible architecture and artwork they saw the buildings are in denger the adriatic sea is raising venice is slowly sinking i hope they can see it what is the most obvious faul of this paragraph

Answer 1

The most obvious fault of this paragraph is the lack of punctuation marks. The entire paragraph is one sentence, when there are supposed to be periods, commas, and other punctuation marks to separate them. This makes this paragraph one run-on sentence, which is grammatically incorrect.