Question

Its a long story. I just want feedback.

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Honestly when I read it I feel in love with it. This seems really good. If it where me I would say falling with the waves. Because since I started writing music and giving my own titles to them I think the best one would be falling with the waves since you feel the waves and the ocean is calling to you. But this is you story. So why don't you choose one from deep down in you heart. That is what I do and trust me it helps.

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Hope this helps and good luck :)