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The sentence which makes a <span>revision that offers the most improvement in sentence fluency is:
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Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.
This sentence uses the correct conjunctions and suggests correct presentation and interpretation of the ideas.</span>
1. <span>D) Flying high above the clouds, Austin saw the airplane.
2. </span><span>B) While swimming, the towels did not have a chance to dry.
3. </span><span>B) most famous
4. </span><span>B) is a popular tourist area
5. </span><span>C) across the field
6. </span><span>A) Maria
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